Feedback of our first draft

Yesterday I presented our music video to the rest of our media group. They gave us some contructive critisicisium such as using straight cuts instead of fancy transistions all the time. Also make cuts smaller because they seem to go on a bit to long. The final bit of criticisium was that some shots were repetive. To over come this, we'll edit our video so that it has straight cuts and shooter clips. Dan will be able to walk again as of from next week so we will film some more footage so that we have more varaity of shots and footage so that our music video be as repetivive as our first draft.